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I don't remember even going to sleep; I thought to myself, come to think of it, I don't remember even coming home. I closed my eyes tight and tired to rack my brain. Come on, where was I last? Something clicked, and then I was there. It was like watching a movie, I could feel the wind, the bike handle bars, and I could even feel my heart beating.
I watched as I waved goodbye, to my friends as they got into the car. They shouted something to me, but I couldn't understand. I turned back around, and started moving on my bike. The sunshine blaring in my eyes. I squinted, trying to see in front of me. Someone yelled watch out, and a dog came running towards me. I felt the bike bump, as it turned off the curb. I heard barking, as I fell onto the cement. I looked up, hearing a car horn.
I opened my eyes. No, I can't be dead. I looked around suddenly noticing crew members cleaning the street. I'm here; I can feel the wind, I'm breathing. I took a deep breath. I must be dreaming, I have to be dreaming. A feeling sank in me, realization of what happened. I felt the need to cry.
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please enjoy, I would like feedback as well, so that I may continue with the story.



Sponge you will be missed. Rest in Peace:(


I have been getting lot's of comments of the picture, (I didn't even think about it when I started writing), The picture is not mine, trust me I wish I could do something like that. Here is where I found it [link]
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!Chersgallery Sep 11, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
i love alice, this is so cool!
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~pmadison Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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*Dieffi Aug 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I have featured this beautyful art in my newest BLUE-collection![link]
I hope you will enjoy and agree!
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Mood: Love ~Scara161 Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very good, very tragic as well.
Will you ever think of continuing?
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~pmadison Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yes, I already wrote the next part [link] hope you like it.
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~Scara161 Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool!
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I can sense the sadness in your writing.:( Still, it's very good.:nod:
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Mood: Love ~pmadison Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? wow, thanks for the compliment though.
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~Cobro2 Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome pic really reallllllllllllllyyyyy goood
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~pmadison Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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